Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 5.9s

Clear skies will carry us through the rest of the evening and overnight, as temperatures drop to 6 degrees. Tomorrow brings overcast skies right through the morning and afternoon, reaching a high of 12. As we head into the evening, the cloud clears away to leave starry skies. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 9 degrees.

• soft through_overuse: "through the morning and afternoon" is clumsy: say "through the day" (or "all day") instead.

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 5.1s

Clear skies will carry us through the rest of the evening and overnight, as temperatures drop to 6 degrees. Tomorrow brings overcast skies all day, reaching a high of 12. As we head into the evening, the cloud clears away to leave starry skies. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 9 degrees.

• hard word_count: The forecast is only 44 words before the sign-off. Add a complete sentence or two from the data (for example the day's high, or how the evening turns out) to reach about 60 words, in full sentences. Add weather facts only, no comment on how nice the day will be.

Iteration 2 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 6.7s selected — this is what aired

Clear skies will carry us through the rest of the evening and overnight, as temperatures drop to 6 degrees. Tomorrow brings overcast skies through the day, reaching a high of 12. As we head into the evening, the cloud clears away to leave starry skies. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 9 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 6.4s selected — this is what aired

It will stay clear right through the night, with the low settling at 6 degrees. For tomorrow, expect overcast skies from the morning, with early mist patches lifting by mid-morning. Temperatures will climb to a high of 12 degrees before the cloud moves away to leave a clear evening. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's mainly clear and 10 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 5.5s selected — this is what aired

We can expect clear skies this evening, with a few clouds drifting by. It stays clear overnight, and temperatures drop to 6 degrees. Tomorrow brings overcast conditions through the day, reaching a high of 12 degrees, with some mist patches lifting by mid-morning. The sky clears again tomorrow evening. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 10 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 13.9s selected — this is what aired

Clear skies remain for the rest of the afternoon, with a high of 10 degrees. It stays clear into the evening, though we'll see a few clouds. Overnight, the sky clears again and temperatures dip to 6 degrees. For tomorrow, we can expect overcast conditions through the day, reaching 12 degrees, before it clears tomorrow evening. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 11 degrees.

• soft tomorrow_repeat: "tomorrow" is said twice in one sentence ("For tomorrow, we can expect overcast conditions through the day, reach..."). Say it once, then "the morning", "the afternoon" (e.g. "Looking ahead to tomorrow, clear skies in the morning...").

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 14.0s

Clear skies remain for the rest of the afternoon, with a high of 10 degrees. It stays clear into the evening, though we'll see a few clouds. Overnight, the sky clears again and temperatures dip to 6 degrees. For tomorrow, we can expect overcast conditions through the morning and afternoon, reaching 12 degrees, before it clears in the evening. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 11 degrees.

• soft through_overuse: "through the morning and afternoon" is clumsy: say "through the day" (or "all day") instead.

Iteration 2 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 4.5s

Clear skies remain for the rest of the afternoon, with a high of 10 degrees. It stays clear into the evening, though we'll see a few clouds. Overnight, the sky clears again and temperatures dip to 6 degrees. For tomorrow, we can expect overcast conditions through the morning and afternoon, reaching 12 degrees, before it clears in the evening. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 11 degrees.

• soft through_overuse: "through the morning and afternoon" is clumsy: say "through the day" (or "all day") instead.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 9.1s

Clear skies take us through the rest of the afternoon and continue right into the evening, with temperatures around 12 degrees. Those starry skies stay with us overnight as it turns chilly, dropping to 7. Tomorrow brings overcast conditions through the morning and afternoon, reaching a high of 11. Cloud breaks then start to appear tomorrow evening. Right now in Marlow, it's clear and 13 degrees.

• soft temp_figure_units: The figure "11" is given with no unit — neither its sentence nor the immediately previous sentence supplies a temperature with "degrees". Add "degrees" unless it was stated with a temperature in this sentence or the immediately previous one.
• soft through_overuse: "through the morning and afternoon" is clumsy: say "through the day" (or "all day") instead.
• hard fact_check: "with temperatures around 12 degrees" — the remaining afternoon is 12°C, but the evening is 10°C.

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 11.6s selected — this is what aired

Clear skies take us through the rest of the afternoon and continue right into the evening, with a high of 12 degrees. Those starry skies stay with us overnight as it turns chilly, dropping to 7. Tomorrow brings overcast conditions through the day, reaching a high of 11 degrees. Cloud breaks then start to appear tomorrow evening. Right now in Marlow, it's clear and 13 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 5.6s

We have unbroken sunshine for the rest of this afternoon, with a pleasant 14 degrees. The skies remain clear right through the evening and overnight, when it will drop to a low of 7. For tomorrow, expect overcast skies through the morning and afternoon, reaching 11 degrees, before some cloud breaks develop in the evening. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's clear and 14 degrees.

• soft through_overuse: "through the morning and afternoon" is clumsy: say "through the day" (or "all day") instead.

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 6.1s selected — this is what aired

We have unbroken sunshine for the rest of this afternoon, with a pleasant 14 degrees. The skies remain clear right through the evening and overnight, when it will drop to a low of 7. For tomorrow, expect overcast skies through the day, reaching 11 degrees, before some cloud breaks develop in the evening. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's clear and 14 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 6.2s

Plenty of sunshine will take us through the rest of the afternoon, with temperatures peaking at 14 degrees. Those clear skies will stay with us into the evening, leaving us with starry skies overnight as temperatures dip to 7. Tomorrow brings overcast skies right through the morning and afternoon, reaching a high of 11 degrees. Right now in Marlow, it's clear and 14 degrees.

• soft through_overuse: "through the morning and afternoon" is clumsy: say "through the day" (or "all day") instead.

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 4.0s selected — this is what aired

Plenty of sunshine will take us through the rest of the afternoon, with temperatures peaking at 14 degrees. Those clear skies will stay with us into the evening, leaving us with starry skies overnight as temperatures dip to 7. Tomorrow brings overcast skies through the day, reaching a high of 11 degrees. Right now in Marlow, it's clear and 14 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 5.9s selected — this is what aired

Clear skies will carry us through the rest of the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees. It stays clear as we head into the evening, with starry skies overnight and temperatures falling to 7 degrees, though it will feel colder than that. For tomorrow, an overcast morning gives way to clear skies in the afternoon, with a high of 12. Right now in Marlow, it's clear and 13 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 4.3s selected — this is what aired

We have plenty of sunshine to take us through the afternoon, with temperatures climbing to a high of 14 degrees. Those clear skies continue into the evening and through the night, dropping to 7 degrees, though it will feel cooler than that. Tomorrow brings an overcast start, before skies clear again for the afternoon with a high of 12. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 12 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 4.7s selected — this is what aired

Bright, clear skies stay with us through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees. It remains clear into the evening and overnight, with the temperature dipping to 7 degrees, though it will feel cooler than that. Tomorrow we can look forward to an overcast morning followed by clear skies for the afternoon. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 12 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 5.8s

We have clear skies for the rest of this morning with just the odd cloud around. That lovely sunshine continues through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees. It stays completely clear into this evening and overnight, with temperatures falling to 7 degrees. For tomorrow, we can expect some patchy cloud in the morning, turning overcast for the afternoon. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's partly cloudy and 11 degrees.

• soft editorial_filler: "lovely" is the presenter commenting on the weather, not reporting it. Remove it (or reword the sentence so it only states the weather).

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 3.3s selected — this is what aired

We have clear skies for the rest of this morning with just the odd cloud around. That sunshine continues through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees. It stays completely clear into this evening and overnight, with temperatures falling to 7 degrees. For tomorrow, we can expect some patchy cloud in the morning, turning overcast for the afternoon. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's partly cloudy and 11 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 5.8s selected — this is what aired

It stays overcast for the rest of this morning, but sunshine breaks through this afternoon with a high of 14 degrees. The skies remain clear into this evening and right through the night, as temperatures drop down to 7 degrees. Tomorrow brings some patchy cloud during the morning, before conditions turn overcast everywhere for the afternoon. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's overcast and 10 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 5.9s selected — this is what aired

Cloud covers the rest of the morning, but that will give way to clear, sunny skies this afternoon, reaching 14 degrees. Those clear skies last right into the evening, with a few clouds drifting in overnight as the temperature drops to 7, though it will feel cooler than that. For tomorrow, we can expect fog in the morning before skies clear again in the afternoon. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's overcast and 9 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 5.2s selected — this is what aired

It is an overcast start this morning, but the cloud will clear to leave sunny skies this afternoon, with a high of 14 degrees. We keep those clear skies into the evening, with just the odd cloud overnight as temperatures fall to 7 degrees, though it will feel cooler than that. Tomorrow brings fog in the morning, followed by clear skies in the afternoon. Right now in Marlow, it's overcast and 9 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 7.1s selected — this is what aired

A rather grey and overcast start to this morning gives way to clear skies this afternoon, with temperatures reaching a high of 14 degrees. Those clear skies stay with us into the evening, before a few clouds drift in overnight as it drops to 7 degrees, though it will feel colder than that. For tomorrow, morning fog will soon clear to leave a bright, sunny afternoon. Right now in Marlow, it's mainly clear and 8 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 5.6s selected — this is what aired

Clear skies continue for the rest of the night, holding steady at 8 degrees. Clouds quickly roll in to leave an overcast morning, with any mist patches lifting by mid-morning. The cloud melts away again this afternoon, bringing us plenty of sunshine and a high of 14 degrees. It stays completely clear and starry right through the evening. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 8 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 5.0s selected — this is what aired

A few patches of cloud will stay with us through the early hours, dropping to 8 degrees. Overcast skies then take over as we head into the morning, with mist patches lifting by mid-morning. The cloud clears completely for a bright afternoon, peaking at a high of 14 degrees. Expect clear, starry skies right through the evening. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's partly cloudy and 10 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 5.2s selected — this is what aired

Clear skies will take us through the rest of the night, dipping to 8 degrees. A grey, overcast blanket moves in for the morning, though any early mist patches should lift by mid-morning. The cloud breaks away for an afternoon of unbroken sunshine, reaching 14 degrees. We can look forward to clear skies lasting right through the evening. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's mainly clear and 9 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 5.5s

Partly cloudy skies will see out the rest of the night, with a low of 8 degrees. A dull, overcast start follows as we head into the morning, with a few mist patches lifting early on. The clouds will clear by the afternoon to leave plenty of sunshine and a high of 14. Skies stay clear into the evening. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's mainly clear and 10 degrees.

• soft temp_figure_units: The figure "14" is given with no unit — neither its sentence nor the immediately previous sentence supplies a temperature with "degrees". Add "degrees" unless it was stated with a temperature in this sentence or the immediately previous one.

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 3.6s selected — this is what aired

Partly cloudy skies will see out the rest of the night, with a low of 8 degrees. A dull, overcast start follows as we head into the morning, with a few mist patches lifting early on. The clouds will clear by the afternoon to leave plenty of sunshine and a high of 14 degrees. Skies stay clear into the evening. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's mainly clear and 10 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it (fallback) — 16.2s

Clear skies continue for the rest of the night as temperatures drop to 8 degrees. We can look forward to new sunshine as we head into the morning, with just the odd cloud passing through. It stays dry and bright through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees. The sky remains clear and starry to finish the day. Right now in Marlow, it's mainly clear and 10 degrees.

• soft editorial_filler: "to finish the day" is the presenter commenting on the weather, not reporting it. Remove it (or reword the sentence so it only states the weather).
• hard night_sun: "It stays dry and bright through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees." puts sunshine or brightness in the dark. The evening and night are dark, so say clear or starry skies then, and keep "sunshine" and "bright" for the daylight periods; the morning's sunshine is new, not carried on from the night ("clear skies through the night, with sunshine in the morning").

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 2.6s selected — this is what aired

Clear skies continue for the rest of the night as temperatures drop to 8 degrees. We can look forward to sunshine as we head into the morning, with just the odd cloud passing through. It stays dry and bright through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees. The sky remains clear and starry. Right now in Marlow, it's mainly clear and 10 degrees.

• hard night_sun: "It stays dry and bright through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees." puts sunshine or brightness in the dark. The evening and night are dark, so say clear or starry skies then, and keep "sunshine" and "bright" for the daylight periods; the morning's sunshine is new, not carried on from the night ("clear skies through the night, with sunshine in the morning").

Iteration 2 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 2.4s

Clear skies continue for the rest of the night as temperatures drop to 8 degrees. We can look forward to sunshine as we head into the morning, with just the odd cloud passing through. It stays dry and bright through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees. The sky remains clear and starry. Right now in Marlow, it's mainly clear and 10 degrees.

• hard night_sun: "It stays dry and bright through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees." puts sunshine or brightness in the dark. The evening and night are dark, so say clear or starry skies then, and keep "sunshine" and "bright" for the daylight periods; the morning's sunshine is new, not carried on from the night ("clear skies through the night, with sunshine in the morning").

Iteration 3 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 2.6s

Clear skies continue for the rest of the night as temperatures drop to 8 degrees. We can look forward to sunshine as we head into the morning, with just the odd cloud passing through. It stays dry and bright through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees. The sky remains clear and starry. Right now in Marlow, it's mainly clear and 10 degrees.

• hard night_sun: "It stays dry and bright through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees." puts sunshine or brightness in the dark. The evening and night are dark, so say clear or starry skies then, and keep "sunshine" and "bright" for the daylight periods; the morning's sunshine is new, not carried on from the night ("clear skies through the night, with sunshine in the morning").

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 6.7s

A few clouds drift through for the rest of the night, with temperatures dipping to 8 degrees. Any cloud soon melts away as we head into the morning, bringing clear skies and plenty of sunshine. That fine, sunny weather stays with us through the afternoon alongside a high of 14. Skies stay clear into the evening, making for a quiet and starry end to the day. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's partly cloudy and 10 degrees.

• soft temp_figure_units: The figure "14" is given with no unit — neither its sentence nor the immediately previous sentence supplies a temperature with "degrees". Add "degrees" unless it was stated with a temperature in this sentence or the immediately previous one.

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 7.9s selected — this is what aired

A few clouds drift through for the rest of the night, with temperatures dipping to 8 degrees. Any cloud soon melts away as we head into the morning, bringing clear skies and plenty of sunshine. That fine, sunny weather stays with us through the afternoon alongside a high of 14 degrees. Skies stay clear into the evening, making for a quiet and starry end to the day. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's partly cloudy and 10 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 10.4s

Clear skies will stay with us through the rest of the night, leading to an overnight low of 8 degrees. Tomorrow brings some cloud drifting across the sky in the morning. That clears away as we head into the afternoon, leaving us with unbroken sunshine and a high of 14. Right now in Marlow, it's mainly clear and 10 degrees.

• soft temp_figure_units: The figure "14" is given with no unit — neither its sentence nor the immediately previous sentence supplies a temperature with "degrees". Add "degrees" unless it was stated with a temperature in this sentence or the immediately previous one.

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 6.2s selected — this is what aired

Clear skies will stay with us through the rest of the night, leading to an overnight low of 8 degrees. Tomorrow brings some cloud drifting across the sky in the morning. That clears away as we head into the afternoon, leaving us with unbroken sunshine and a high of 14 degrees. Right now in Marlow, it's mainly clear and 10 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemini-3.8-flash — 7.1s

A few clouds will drift across largely clear skies overnight, as temperatures drop to 9 degrees. For tomorrow, we can look forward to a fine and dry day. The morning will see clear skies with the odd cloud, followed by plenty of sunshine through the afternoon and a high of 14. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's partly cloudy and 10 degrees.

• soft temp_figure_units: The figure "14" is given with no unit — neither its sentence nor the immediately previous sentence supplies a temperature with "degrees". Add "degrees" unless it was stated with a temperature in this sentence or the immediately previous one.

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 4.0s selected — this is what aired

A few clouds will drift across largely clear skies overnight, as temperatures drop to 9 degrees. For tomorrow, we can look forward to a fine and dry day. The morning will see clear skies with the odd cloud, followed by plenty of sunshine through the afternoon and a high of 14 degrees. Right now at Great Marlow School, it's partly cloudy and 10 degrees.

No violations.

Iteration 0 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 2.1s

Clear skies will stay with us for the rest of the evening and throughout the night, with temperatures dipping to 8 degrees. Tomorrow brings a dry day and clear skies, though there will be a few clouds during the morning. It will stay bright through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 11 degrees.

• hard night_sun: "It will stay bright through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees." puts sunshine or brightness in the dark. The evening and night are dark, so say clear or starry skies then, and keep "sunshine" and "bright" for the daylight periods; the morning's sunshine is new, not carried on from the night ("clear skies through the night, with sunshine in the morning").

Iteration 1 — served by google/gemma-4-31b-it — 4.5s selected — this is what aired

Clear skies will stay with us for the rest of the evening and throughout the night, with temperatures dipping to 8 degrees. Tomorrow brings a dry day and clear skies, though there will be a few clouds during the morning. It will be bright through the afternoon, reaching a high of 14 degrees. Right now at the Marlow FM studios, it's clear and 11 degrees.

No violations.